great, but bad intro
The introduction text is obviously way too lengthy and summarizes badyl. It really seemed like you were summarizing what could be told over a series of games instead of one really uber long story.
And you didnt include enough details on and didnt go into depth on the story. this is really too vague and not enough details and reasoning behind the story.
You could also have included a "skip" function for the story atleast.
gameplay is pretty fun. The whole resolution thingie bothers me.
For those with monitors or video cards who cant display atleast 1024 by 768 cant view the entire flash in one screen, the top or the bottom may be cut off.
A more square-ish size might help with that.
But other than that great job!